|Publisher:||Dave H Jordan|
|Product dimensions:||6.00(w) x 9.00(h) x 0.58(d)|
About the Author
In 2004, Dave acquired copyrights for his empowerment guide entitled The New Millennium Warrior's Empowerment Guide and for his compilation of inspirational and love poems entitled Poetic Empowerment. In 2005, Dave began writing his first novel, Tribal Law; however, between 2005 and 2011, Dave and his wife were challenged with a series of physical complications ranging from shoulder surgeries to major back surgeries, and breast cancer (his wife is a 8 year survivor), as well as being inundated with financial difficulties. Through it all, their friendship and love has only grown stronger and is the catalyst for the completion of "Tribal Law: Is The Law Stronger Than Love." His next novel, "TRIBAL LAW: REVELATION" is set to release September 2015. Fulfilling another goal, Dave H Jordan earned an Associate of Arts in Psychology in 2009 and a Bachelors of Science in Psychology in 2011. His profound faith in God, his love for his lovely wife and his strong desire to help others are the driving forces for all achievements of his life.
Most Helpful Customer Reviews
I enjoyed the story line but it was definitely geared to teenagers but this being said, this book needs to be reworked. The characters are written as successful adults but there was too much modern day slang which made the characters seem unintelligent. The story line lacks consistency with the past, present and future tenses along with many typos, made up words and misuse of words. The word "loose" is not the same definition as "lose" and the salutation "Mss." doesn't really make any sense. There was also too much redundancy of cliches as though the author didn't know any other words or phrases to use in their place. If the author goes back and edits this books, along with changing the cover that looks like it should be on a history book, to make it a young adult novel, he would have a great story with the ability to have sequels.